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Wednesday 27 September 2017

The first time recount

This was my recount about the first time i went rainbows'end with my family and how we had the best time of my five year life .

2 comments:

  1. Hi PJ I looked at your post about the first time i went to Rainbows end and i saw some mistakes, you might wanna read over your blog post but besides the mistake its pretty good. :D

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  2. Hi PJ your post about Rainbows end is awesome but there are a few mistakes in there and i ask you politely to read over and fix the few mistakes :D thanks for readying my comment have a good day.

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